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Apoc_admin (Permanently banned)5/Aug | 05:49 


Posh-Mafia
216 members
Human trafficking mission in China

You traveled to Europe with the Water Blaster and brought 13 of the 14 Chinese safely on land. You brought them to United Kingdom. Unfortunately, 1 Chinese did not survive the trip

Not sure if it is just me but this sounds wrong almost like you were delivering a take-away instead of a person.

Maybe immigrant would work better.

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Money truck robbery result

It worked! This robbery earned you £ 29,250, but you car took a little damage.

Should be

It worked! This robbery earned you £ 29,250, but your car took a little damage

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boxing

it says

You started a boxing session that lasts 5 minutes (You dont have to wait on this page)!

should be

You started a boxing session that lasts 5 minutes (You don't have to wait on this page)!


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Mission 8 reads -

Your total strength is 185,307. To beat your opponents, you need to use your strength smartly. It sometimes can be wise to retreat before striking hard again. That's why I would like to see you to de- or increase your strength to precisely 182,527. You must decide for yourself how to achieve this, but attacking people will lower your strength!!

I had no strength loss on my game when this mission came. Elom informed this is was not as bug as you could lose strength in boxing matches. . . Not a bug o.k then a sense error

In a game with no strength loss it should read :

Your total strength is 185,307. To beat your opponents, you need to use your strength smartly. It sometimes can be wise to retreat before striking hard again. That's why I would like to see you to de- or increase your strength to precisely 182,527. You must decide for yourself how to achieve this, but losing boxing matches lowers your strength!!

Additional message:
Red-light district

It says

Each prostitute in a brothel earns you £ 40 an hour. However, the rent for the room is £ 20 per hour. Prostitutes out on the street earn you £ 15 an hour

The bit in italics seems rather pointless to me: why not put it more simply as

Each prostitute in a brothel earns you £ 20 an hour. However, you can not auction these. ( or sell these to the pope = if the admin has that function active in their game ). Prostitutes out on the street earn you £ 15 an hour.

Because in theory the room rent does not come into it, all they do is make £20 and hour, so there is no point even mentioning that they make £40.

Last changed by Apoc_admin on 2011-08-19 4:24 AM.
 

Beast_Mode16/Oct | 22:21 


Dirty_Money_2
62 members
On detectives:
The time it will take for the victim to be found, depends on there rank. It will take a minimum of 1 minute and a maximum of 60 minutes before the location is revealed. Your detective could also fail to find the victim. You will receive a message the moment the detective has finished his work.

Should be:
The time it will take for the victim to be found depends on THEIR rank.
 

winsdor225222/Dec | 02:02 


Dawn-Of-The-Dead
2 members
On which page is the speech error?
http://www.mafiacreator.com/Dawn-Of-The-Dead/admin/duplicate-accounts

What was the speech error?
An overview off all players who appear more than once in the database based on IP address.

How should it really be?
An overview of all players who appear more than once in the database based on IP address.

an extra F in of

also when a player cancels their app for a family you get this msg

Your application to the mafia family was denied.

should be

Your application to the mafia family was canceled.


Last changed by winsdor2252 on 2011-12-22 3:40 AM.
 

Admin31/Dec | 06:21 

Money truck robbery

It worked! This robbery earned you £ 5,500, but you car took a little damage

should say your car not you car
 

Terletzky15/Jan | 21:42 


Mafiariket
2 members
On which page is the speech error?
www.mafiacreator.com

What was the speech error?
"Buy site extra's"

How should it really be?
"Buy site extras"

That's a common spelling mistake.

The "'" is acctually a "word-shortener." What it says on MC is acctually "Buy site extra is", because "extra's" is shortened for "extra is." It's normal, most people make this mistake.
 

Macho21/Apr | 15:27 


RespectedMafia
108 members
Post was deleted by moderator

Reason: Posting in the wrong forum
 

gangstasinc16/Oct | 11:49 


gangstas-inc
7 members
referral reward choices..
cash .. should be "in-game cash"
bank account .. should be "added to your in-game bank account"

Additional message:
default manual..
real money .. should be "in-game money"

Additional message 2:
human trafficking..
http://www.gangstas-inc.com/smuggling
"Unfortunately, 3 passenger did not survive the trip"
should read "Unfortunately, 3 passengers did not survive the trip"

Additional message 3:
money truck robbery..
http://www.gangstas-inc.com/transport
"you car took a little damage"
should read "your car took a little damage"
(i know this has been reported previously, but it remains unfixed)

Additional message 4:
houses..
"can not" should read "cannot"

Additional message 5:
cars..
"Mini Mini" should read "Mini"

if mc could give me access to the system, as a native english speaker i could fix many of these items and more when reported or as i come across them as an active player in my own game.



Last changed by gangstasinc on 2012-10-23 5:12 PM.
 

cjelliott31/Oct | 07:36 


Mafia_mmo
248 members
on crew page it says he and it should be he/she
 

jurren28/Jun | 13:01 


pussycrimes
22 members
At the crew page it says 'Holland' as starting country but Holland are only few of the provinces it should say Netherlands instead.

I'm sorry for my English i'm Dutch.
 

Shaun31/Jul | 05:59 


EmpireWars
17 members
If more that one player is going for the Pot after the final betting round is finished, the hands are revealed (showdown). To win the Pot, the players must show their whole hand, even if part of the hand is sufficient to claim the win


should be than